Yaadein
Yaadein hoti hain os ki boondon ki tarah,kitaabon mein qaid sookhe phoolon ki tarah,
chattaanon se takraati saagar ki lehron ki tarah.
yeh yaadein humein hasaati hain,rulaati hain.
aur yahi hain jo humein zindagi jeena sikhaati hain
Monday 6 August 2007
Yaadein hoti hain os ki boondon ki tarah,kitaabon mein qaid sookhe phoolon ki tarah,
chattaanon se takraati saagar ki lehron ki tarah.
yeh yaadein humein hasaati hain,rulaati hain.
aur yahi hain jo humein zindagi jeena sikhaati hain
10 comments/suggestions:
well said....
beauty and brains seldom go hand in hand - but isn't this a wondrful exception?
- Oshkosh
1st three lines r good thn aisa lagta hai ki jaise jaldi hi "The End" de diya ho....
vicharon ko falne diya karo, unhe zindgi ke har pehlu ko chune do
i am not expert ... but i liked it very much
really awesome..
Har mod pe viraaniyan, har safar mein akelapan...
akele rahon pe jab chalte chalte beetein palon ko yaad karti hun...tab mehsoos hota hai ki shayad koi kabhi tanha hi nahin hota...
yaadein peecha nahin chodti...saanse dam nahin todti...aankhein jab banjar ho jaati hain...aansoo jab tham jaate hain tab ehsas hota hai akelepan ka, pyaar ki kami ka, dard ka, tanhai ka...
Kis tarah zindagi basar ho? kya pyaar sach mein hota hai?...agar hota hai to meri zindagi se hi khafa kyun hai?... aabaad kyun nahin hai meri bhi zindagi pyaar se... un lamho se jinhe log khoobsoorat kehte hain...
Woh pal kahan kho gaye hain...andhere mein chupe kyun hai...tanha dil ko sukoon kyun nahin dete...
Sochte sochte aankhein fir bhar aayi hain...
yeh aankhein bhi aadmi ki tarah hai...kabhi tanha nahin hoti... aadmi yaadon ke sahare jeeta hai aur aankhein ashkon ke sahare roti hain.
ya this is nice dear? but i cant understand wat u want to show here? this is rite to show that u are the failures.........of .....or wats.....?????....how u can say and wat we can say....abt this?.....remember that every man has his own thoughts!!!!!!!!!!
achi he
wow, nice...
wow, nice...
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