Saturday, 16 May 2009

Black Blood

[Photograph taken by Anukriti(Me)...highlights a shadowy blood stained hand(my own) seeking justice in its blurred reality.]
The abyss of my melancholic mind,
Has eyes created to be perpetually blind!
Festered in this is, an inconsolable individual's soul.
That breaks and beholds the blurred vision of a goal!

The body is molested by Desire;raped by Hope...
Its essence is intoxicated by an incurable dope!
And thus,the forces of Repose,Anger,Greed and Sin are...
RAGS of beggary that appear anesthetizing from afar!

We desire Pretense, Artifice, Invention, and Disgusie;
The Tempest proclaims,"all debt is PAID of he that dies!"
PAID imprudently at the showroom of this world...
So that the manikins of pestilence, at our faces are hurled!

They isolate my identity, they deface my face!
And yet am I supposed to belong to this place?
My language is lost, my happiness is entombed as dead!
The colour of my blood is indeed black!It can never be red!

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16 comments/suggestions:

ARINDAM DEY said...

Good work! It struck the right chords. Keep up the good work!

mayank puri said...

thats a great post i wud say. very deep meaning and hard hiting. keep up the gud work

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Sharad Sharma said...

if I say that it was great,I shall be understating.

Take a bow

Cheers,
Sharad
Medley

Phoenix said...

one of your best!! your control over the language is getting better! there is a sense of distancing yourself from the experiences.. you are on your way to master them! :)

Prasant Naidu. said...

Nice and mesmerizing.

Keep Rocking,
PN.

anishthomas said...

simply Fabulous.....I'm not getting word to explain how superb was it :) .

The Rainmaker said...

i was more intrigued by the photograph...obviously you are trying to depict the victim out here... but you know ordinarily, the hands of the cruel are bloodstained... that's why i was kinda confused...

but i got the message that you tried to portray, and it's a noble one...

:)
cheers,
raunak

http://tales-from-the-dark-side.blogspot.com/

varunshridhar said...

is that PS edited? and why bloodstained?

the pic does blend quite well with the lines but isn't the lining red?
undescribed, it does give away different connotations, doesn't it?

ultimatechange said...

U wrote it very well!

As the Mind Meanders said...

My blood is black!It can never be red!

In a colour obsessed world

Well said!!

Ashish Sukhadeve said...

Wow.."Its essence is intoxicated by an incurable dope!
And thus,the forces of Repose,Anger,Greed and Sin are..."

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Subhayan "Wrahool" Mukerjee said...

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Shankar said...

Ur about me section is sooo Appealing...

silentlyexpress said...

amazing writing..as i read each post from you i am simply amazed at the kind of words you use and your style

jasdeep mandia said...

awesome.
loved the lines:- They isolate my identity, they deface my face!
And yet am I supposed to belong to this place?
and the last two lines also