Andekhe Khwaab
Aankhon mein andekhe khwaab hainaur hothon pe kayi ankahi baatein
Baaton mein ansuni khwahishein hain
Aur khwahishon mein andheri si raatein
Andhere mein tanhai nazar aati hain
Saath deti hain sirf tumhari yaadein
Yaadon mein bhi aankhein roti hain
kyunki bikhar gaye hain saare naatein
17 comments/suggestions:
i read all of it...
do u real feel wat u write...
or u feel to write
or u write to feel....
aapne kafi gahre vichar ko spasht tarike se likha hain... atyant prabhav sheel panktiya vyakta ki hain aapne.
itna depression sehat ke liye theek nahi NALAYAK!
shabdo mein jadoo hai
Allah aapki kalam ko barakarar rakhe
waise aapki iss shayari ek lie bas ek hi shabd kahunga
Laajawab
Impressive,
Attractive,
Thought Provoking..
in ur words.. "Amalgamation" of all!
keep up ur work.. All the best
keep up the good work..keep it up nd keep clicking ...u ll improve on ur skills.
tumahri bhavnayen bahut hi judi huyi hain....ye achi baat hai
aisa flow bandhe rakhta hai
ek completeness hai...panktiyon me
congrts 4 tht...keep it up
tumne likhna kabse start kiya tha?
i cant believe tht a person can write like tht in a vry early age..
waise to itni gehraii tabhi aati hai kisi k sabdo me jab usne ye sab feel kiya ho ya bahut kareeb se dekha ho.....!!!!
....anyway B L E S S Y O U
n goodLuck
kisi ka intazaar kar rahi hain ye aankhen...lekin wo kahin aaspaas hi hai..purani yaadon ka daman chor ke aaj main jeevan beetane ka prayash kare...yehi satya hai
awesome.......i liked the most 1...
Har mod pe viraaniyan, har safar mein akelapan...
d words magic only [/)]
amazing thots and photography. u r a girl who lives beyond imagination. u r having a very gud creative mind....
keep adding more i havnt read all ur work but watever i read was gud...
are u an art major
read your blog its very deep and your thoughts are very beautiful.
MANNAT
really awesum pix .........love the way u shot
ख्याब शीशे के हैं,
किर्चों के सिवा कया देंगें.
टूट जायेगें तो,
ज़ख्मों के सिवा क्या देगें.
ktheleo@www.sachmein.blogspot.com
Surely short of words to say.....
i dont know wat to write............
just one word....impeccable.....
really liked it from the bottom of my heart...........
are u an art major
@Dionna
Yes I am :)
Impressive, Attractive, Thought Provoking.. in ur words.. "Amalgamation" of all! keep up ur work.. All the best
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