Baarish~Bheegi Palkein,Sard Mausam aur Ek Tanha Dil
Aaj kuch khwabon ka qatl kar diya, kuch khwahishon ko viraan kar diya maine...
Baarish ki rimjhim sunna, Maa ke haath ki garma-garam chai peena, ghanto baith ke mausam ka luft uthana, tumhe har pal yaad karna, baarish ki boondon ko chehre pe mehsus karna, woh tumhare saath bheegna aur saath saath chalna. Manzilon ko raahon se milana aur raahon ko khwaabon se jodna. Mujhe saari baatein aaj bhi yaad aati hain. Boondon ki tarah unhe haathon ki lakiron mein basana chahti hun, un haseen lamhon ko haqiqat banana chahti hun par khud ko majboor mehsus karti hu .Kal aankhon mein aazaad khwaab the, aaj qaid umeedein hain...Bheegi palkein hain, baarish ki boondon mein jinhe panah mili hai. Sard mausam ki thandak se kaap uthti hun... Sochti hun ke kaash tum paas hote... magar tum paas hokar bhi kitne door ho mujhse... Aaj ek tanha dil hai mere paas aur kuch tanha yaadein.
14 comments/suggestions:
bahoot khoob... kabil-e-tareef!
.. my fav line wud be "Boondein ki tarah unhe haathon ki lakiron mein basana chahti hun.."
actually a minute observation.
cool hai ji mast likha hai something of my type :)
Mast hai Mast aisa hi likha kar.......
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"Kal aankhon mein aazaad khwaab the, aaj qaid umeedein hain..."
Your proficiency in Hindi is as breathtaking as your expressions in English.
What else can I say other than that portmanteau word - "fantabulous"!!! :)
- Your purana fan, Osh.
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this is some real calm hindi i have read after a long time.
reminds me of a song by atif 'yakeen'... dont know why
taliya...maza aa gaya......
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keep up da gr8 work
Great writing skills,You are really a gemstone.
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owner, myviewbeta.blogspot.com
Is it really raining in Delhi ??? ;-)
waah ...kya likha hai...kiske liye?
You've just found a new fan of your writing skills, and your uncanny knack of capturing pics that tell all the unspoken..
Keep up the good work..
Though this is the first time when I'm posting my comment on any blog So I'ld be sincere.
"Manzilon ko raahon se milana aur raahon ko khwaabon se jodna.."
"Kal aankhon mein aazaad khwaab the, aaj qaid umeedein hain.."
"Aaj ek tanha dil hai mere paas aur kuch tanha yaadein..."
I've never felt such intensity before about my long-gone feelings which sometimes linger around..and make me realize what I've been missing throughout years..
great expression of feelings,and one of the best clicks in this blog! :)
Wah....Bas ek baat hai....
Zindagee itnee bhi buree nahin
Ke zindagee ek intezaar ban jaye
Ke khwabo ka maqsad hai haqeeqat me badalna
Is se pehle ki woh bezaar ban jaaye.
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