Wonderful poem... the pic reminds me... Durga puja is fast approaching :)

@Roshmi
Thanks dear:)
Yes, Durga Puja is approaching very soon... looking forward 2 it

Beautifully related and penned! :)

Excellent and touching as ever!!But had to wait too long.Please spare some time for your fan readers.

it really Wonders me how can someone write so beautifully

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bohot khoobsurat nazm hai anu.. bohot khoobsurat, aur bhi laao.. hum intezar karein ge :)

anu this piece of writing has brought back every intense emotion of life.The eternal love has the power to bring back the memory of the lost one.and the nature's offspring i.e rain is concomitant to the reliving of the memory. "SHIULI" has taken me back to my childhood memories where everything used to be so pristine and innocent.And ofcourse there is something in ur writing where past is restored so beautifully and nostalgia is remembered with tranquility and contentment.

love
joyee

Dear Jayeeta,
Sorry for replying late... but you know... I have to think before responding to such beautiful comments of urs...
Shuili had everything except the fact that the flowers had not woken up from their dreamy state... they were given essence by you... your comment has blossomed these flowers... like spring your comment brings life to my post...
Thanks love :)
Anukriti

बहुत सुन्दर भाव हैं।

देवनागरी में क्यों नहीं लिखती। पढ़ने में आसानी होती है।

कृपया वर्ड वेरीफिकेशन हटा लें। यह न केवल मेरी उम्र के लोगों को तंग करता है पर लोगों को टिप्पणी करने से भी हतोत्साहित करता है। आप चाहें तो इसकी जगह कमेंट मॉडरेशन का विकल्प ले लें।

The last four lines were something i cannot praise coz i dont have the language. i cannot tell u what it makes me feel coz i feel like i have as many words in my tongue as a new born baby.

Speechless...

Beautiful Lines.....baki sab panktiyon ne keh hi diya hai.

Found this place today only...feel like I would like to be here for sometime...Do u know Shiuli is d only flower which is supposed to be auspicious even after it falls to ground n picked up for puja..your lines render the same idea..some memories are as fresh as the shiulis at your doorstep..nothing can make them any less pristine..nor even time.

Read it one more time, only to take myself back to the place i was when i first read it!!!.... made me cry like it made the first time...

Read it again today while rummaging my bookmarks... Sometimes the bookmarks really serve their purpose.... :).....

"Shiuli...." :)..

Always a treat to read it... Always and over and over again... No offence to the other posts, but this will always be the best one for me...

"aaj baadalon se zyaada
ye aankhen baras rahi hain
Har baar barasti hain jab bhi
Tumhaari yaad aati hai... hai na shiuli?..."

Is sheher ki rozana daudti zindagi se
Chalo aaj dillagi kar lein...

Read it again!! :') ... always makes me cry...

Read it again. This poem is like my best friend. Someone I can come to when I don't want to go to anybody else... Just me and this poem...

nicely described..

Read it yet again... :)