Mahananda
Mahananda ke ek sire se
kayi kavitaayein judi hain,
Jo tumhe mujhse jodti hain.
kayi kavitaayein judi hain,
Jo tumhe mujhse jodti hain.
Train ki chuk chuk mein bhi to
na jaane kitni kahaniyaan goonjti hain;
na jaane kitni kahaniyaan goonjti hain;
Jo khamoshiyon mein bhi
Mujhe dastak deti hain.
Mujhe dastak deti hain.
Kuch ansuni si kahaniyaan,
Kuch anchui si kavitaayein,
Jinhe maine likha hai.
Jinhe sirf tum sun sakte ho...
mehsoos kar sakte ho.
mehsoos kar sakte ho.
Puraane kitaabon ke panne palat ti hun...
Kayi safahon pe
jhurriyan pad gayi hain;
jhurriyan pad gayi hain;
Siyaahi bhi
dhundhali ho chuki hai.
dhundhali ho chuki hai.
in pannon mein dabe,
Kayi khaamosh gunche
mehfoos hain...
mehfoos hain...
Jin mein aaj bhi
hayaat ki khushboo muattar hai.
hayaat ki khushboo muattar hai.
Aaine se bhi ab kya guzaarish karun?
Mere aks mein,
parchayi mein bhi to...
parchayi mein bhi to...
Bas tum hi tum nazar aate ho.
Word Meanings: Mahananda - name of a river; dastak - knock; ansuni - unheard; unchui - untouched; mehsoos - feel; safahon - pages; jhurriyan - wrinkles; siyaahi: ink; dhundhali - blurred; khaamosh - silent; gunche - flower buds; mehfoos - protected; hayaat - life; muattar - filled with perfume; aaina - mirror; guzaarish - request; aks - reflection
34 comments/suggestions:
reminds me of someone... Someone who has stolen my heart... :) ... Beautiful didi! :)
in khoobsurat panno ki syahi kabhi phiki na pade ye khwahis hai hamari :)
Beautiful!
Very beautiful words and awesome pics indeed!
Like the flowing water..
Reminded of a faiz saab's sher-
Kar raha tha gham-e-jahaan ka hisaab,
Aaj tum yaad be-hisaab aaye !
Keep it up !
N why the new look ? Get rid of it.
Very beautifully written !!!
Beautiful lines, beautiful pics, and a brilliant post :)
Keep Blogging!
Very beautiful:) Padh ke maza aa gaya !:)
Very beautiful:) Padh ke maza aa gaya !:)
Bahut khoobsoorat...aur utne hi pyaare alfazon se saji hui..
Achha laga aapke blog pe ana.. :)
Anukriti, it is a lovely composition full of beautiful thoughts! The enmeshed pictures convey the sentiments. Wish you had written this in Hindi directly too...:)
Great poetry-soft emotions strung in words!!!!
that's such a beautiful read - such an awesome poem :) :)
Very nice complemented well with equally beautiful pics.
beautiful...
so so beautiful...loved every word of it...
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Beautiful yaar anukriti. Mahananda flows through my home town and my school bus used to go over it (still does, but sans me). And the pics are awesome too. :)
Whenever I read ur poems, there's a beautiful serenity in my heart. Ur verse resounds : "hayaat ki khushboo muattar hai" :) :)
jaw-inspriing indeed! loved it n m ur new follower :)
Beautiful blog Anukriti! We briefly met at the Indiblogger meet (I don't think you'd remember!). I really like the way you blend in your pictures with your writing.
Main kaon huun, ye ab khud bhi nahin jaanti huun main,
Tum kaon ho ye khud bhi nahin jaante ho tum.
Har baar tumse yuun hi bichadti rahi huun main,
Har baar yuun hi phir-phir milte rahe ho tum !
Waqt ke dariya mein ravaan do seepiyon se hum,
Aur ek taveel umr si phaili sii ye nadi.
Hi that's is awesome,, Thanks to share with us
Loved it...why don't you write in Hindi font also...would make for a better read
and feels nice to find ppl who still write in and appreciate Hindi :)
Anu, Beautiful captures...beaytiful lines...:)
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Lovely...I was lost in the words..
Really beautiful words Anu....also loved ur pics@anucreative....
nice work....
after a long time found good writing... good job keep it up :)
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lovely lovely poetry..the words....and the images!
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Really beautiful words Anu....also loved ur pics@anucreative.... nice work....
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