Black Blood
[Photograph taken by Anukriti(Me)...highlights a shadowy blood stained hand(my own) seeking justice in its blurred reality.]
The abyss of my melancholic mind,Has eyes created to be perpetually blind!
Festered in this is, an inconsolable individual's soul.
That breaks and beholds the blurred vision of a goal!
The body is molested by Desire;raped by Hope...
Its essence is intoxicated by an incurable dope!
And thus,the forces of Repose,Anger,Greed and Sin are...
RAGS of beggary that appear anesthetizing from afar!
We desire Pretense, Artifice, Invention, and Disgusie;
The Tempest proclaims,"all debt is PAID of he that dies!"
PAID imprudently at the showroom of this world...
So that the manikins of pestilence, at our faces are hurled!
They isolate my identity, they deface my face!
And yet am I supposed to belong to this place?
My language is lost, my happiness is entombed as dead!
The colour of my blood is indeed black!It can never be red!
And yet am I supposed to belong to this place?
My language is lost, my happiness is entombed as dead!
The colour of my blood is indeed black!It can never be red!
16 comments/suggestions:
Good work! It struck the right chords. Keep up the good work!
thats a great post i wud say. very deep meaning and hard hiting. keep up the gud work
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if I say that it was great,I shall be understating.
Take a bow
Cheers,
Sharad
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one of your best!! your control over the language is getting better! there is a sense of distancing yourself from the experiences.. you are on your way to master them! :)
Nice and mesmerizing.
Keep Rocking,
PN.
simply Fabulous.....I'm not getting word to explain how superb was it :) .
i was more intrigued by the photograph...obviously you are trying to depict the victim out here... but you know ordinarily, the hands of the cruel are bloodstained... that's why i was kinda confused...
but i got the message that you tried to portray, and it's a noble one...
:)
cheers,
raunak
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is that PS edited? and why bloodstained?
the pic does blend quite well with the lines but isn't the lining red?
undescribed, it does give away different connotations, doesn't it?
U wrote it very well!
My blood is black!It can never be red!
In a colour obsessed world
Well said!!
Wow.."Its essence is intoxicated by an incurable dope!
And thus,the forces of Repose,Anger,Greed and Sin are..."
Thanks for adding my blog to your network in Indiblogger. Your blog is very interesting.
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Ur about me section is sooo Appealing...
amazing writing..as i read each post from you i am simply amazed at the kind of words you use and your style
awesome.
loved the lines:- They isolate my identity, they deface my face!
And yet am I supposed to belong to this place?
and the last two lines also
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